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I'm done thinking of things to say to you,
I'm done thinkin things will get better than this,
But my love for you will always be true,
Without you I will cease to exsist,
I know it's you i should have never told,
Now i live in miserable black,
I'll live in hell even 'till i grow old,
I need to find my way back on track,
I can't bare to live like this anymoer,
You've left an empty space in my soul,
It's you who I will always adore,
To be together with you was my one goal,
You left me dying,I cannot pretend,
Its for this reason my life i will end.
©2004-2008 ~minijim
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yeah iv really never written poetry before but here it is! its pretty relavent to my life part from the last two lines
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~Iceburn04:iconIceburn04: Jul 2, 2004, 11:18:40 AM
Very good jim, rofl, you got chelsea to cry, that was so funneh.
I still think you take girls to seriously.

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~minijim:iconminijim: Jul 3, 2004, 12:15:00 PM
i dint mean to lol. and no i do not!!
~MANGAK8I:iconMANGAK8I: Jul 4, 2004, 9:00:52 AM
did you not get amy to cry aswell?